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breakdown for young duke:
flow: solid flow even bar length and nothing un balanced about the sylables godo job 7/10
volcab: alright nothing special though 6/10
punches:really nothing here, some vague open ended swings but nothing that i can see with damage to it 4/10
overall:17/30 good on the mechanics of the verse but you need punches
breakdown for diaster master:
flow:horrible you didn't ahve bars match up no mutlis really used this wasn't great at all 5/10
volcab:basic average that about sums it up 6/10
punches:alot of them here nothing that hurt too much but you threw more then duke did my fav was,"you couldn't sweep this battle if u were a jonitor" overall 7/10
overall:18/30
vote--close battle but it was the punches that edged diaster master for the win in this one
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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