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Old 04-02-04, 07:16 PM   #6
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Check Dis Ish...

Spul: 6/10
You Had A Good Flow, Nice Punches, Mulits You Tried For, But You Need To Work On Dem Metaphors and Mulits. Good Drop Though, I Liked Ya Flow The Most.

Stabbolical: 5/10
You Coulda Had This Cat If You Woulda Came Harder Wit Punches. Structure and Flow Was There, But Word Usuage Plays A Big Fact'R. Well Neways, Just Elevate and Stay Dope Pimpin.

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