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Old 04-03-04, 03:54 AM   #5
Afterword
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yo u both had a gud flow
lyrically i was feelin J-mob a lil more, the verse was pretty hott but it didnt get too personal. and the structure wasnt too great which kinda phuck-it up 4 me

ima go with yungstar b/c his shyt seemed more direct, and hit a lil harder
althogh the vocab needs to be elevated

overall both emcees did they thang
vote= yungstar for a lil more flare, with less word usage
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