well i liked the line
cause you can't survive, i'll leave you lyrically decline*
watch you put lipstick on ya head to make up your mind*
but apparently it coulda been stolen lol
make up your own shit dawg
but otha than that i think u had sum tight structure and flow,but keep elevatin
Truth-i liked ur shit man but u gotta stop feedin off him juss rip him apart with sum clever lines that dont involve what he sed in his verse
feel me?
i didnt know who to give this one to but seeing as Rip's middle part of the verse doesnt realli make sense to me imma have to say /v Truth
dont h8 on my vote