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Old 04-03-04, 11:58 AM   #5
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hmmmmmm WOW.........
THE BREAKDOWN
Opener - killa....the distant punches line was fuckin insane
Flow - killa....perfect flow n i was feelin it
Punches - killa....his punches were direct n hit harder than joe's
Structure - killa....all lines lcicked n ur structure was lined up n easy to read
Multi's - killa....is there really an explanation needed?
Sustainment - killa.....you kept it up all battle
Closer - killa....basketball line was fuckin crazy
Enjoyment - killa....had the better verse n had me laughin
LIL JOE - u need to werk on not stretchin yo lines, havin direct punches, n flow....keep the reader into it....elevate ull get betta........
VOTE - killa
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