illugin got this wit his flow, some decent punches but indirect ones, and better structure....work on gettin multi's in there n more sustainment....overall nice verse
GB u had hardly any flow at all....u need to werk on not stretchin lines!!....that will get u structure n sustainment probably....werk on punches....werk on everything man ull get better....n battle people at ur level for now...........aight
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