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Old 04-03-04, 01:21 PM   #5
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weak battle....very very weak battle........its cool both yall r newbies so jus elevate... ok here it is
first of my vote is for razor....
he had a couple multis and his verse made sense
no punches were really made by ne1
madd....i thought ur shit was gonna be good by the way u had ur structure but it wasnt....make ur rhymes clear to the reader u didnt relaly take ne category....elevate u ll get bettter
return the favor.......
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117820
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