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Old 04-03-04, 01:24 PM   #18
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Alright. I like Deuces 'honest' vote there. But anyways.

CounTREE, or however you spell it. You had a pretty nice verse. Your punches weren't all there. You pretty much just told her to go in the kitchen. That's the only good punch.oh yes and the weak mcdonalds punch. You had a nice flow, but need vocab and complexity. Not too bad. And Elevate means Get better, but in nicer terms.

DP, You brought it nice here. You had nice vocab and better punches. I could tell ya didn't come hard, which kind of dissapointed me. and Deuce mentioned the last line, it was wack ending with What?, but definantly didnt lose you the battle. I smell a crew d/r? But anyways. you complexity and wordplay took this from him.

V/ DP.
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