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Old 04-03-04, 04:46 PM   #10
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lil nae - ur punches r indirect...try usin personals to get more direct punches....stretched lines fucked up your flow n structure....try to make ur lines close to the same length...ur closer was the only good part of your verse........
Pro - u didnt even have to come as hard as u did but u merked him......you had the structure goin n that helped ya flow....u had direct punches but no personals....try to werk on usin personals
aight my vote is for pro
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117820
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