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Old 04-03-04, 05:23 PM   #8
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lol ok last time i put so and so won just cause of this i got introuble....so heres the thing Kingz had a better punchlines...."Dog its ‘embarrassing’ battling someone this bad…I’m ‘blushing’ too
Problem is…I wont improve my rep by crushing you" i think that killed it...
As for braveheart....u need to write like kingz did no 1 wants to read str8 across i made that same mistake....ur new so am but i felt ur lines were a lil weak....could have come harder and had better multies....

VOTE KINGZ
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