ya phat mic took this easily.....
he had the punches, flow, structure, creativity, and sustainment.
atticus....i liked ya flow alot....jus werk on keepin ur bars close tot he same amount of syllabes....u dont want stretched lines....and get more direct punches....u have potential....but u cant just rhyme about shit like you did....you have to get at him with direct punches n use personals....aight good luck..........
vote - phat
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