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Old 04-04-04, 02:52 PM   #16
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aight Check It...

Choppa City: 5/10
You Need To Work On Your Structure and Flow Man. Mulits and Metaphors Too. I Know You Can Do Better Kid...Just Elevate Soon!!

Triple N: 6/10
You Got This Cause Your Punches Were Harder. But Your Style and Punches Are Weak. No Offense But You Need To Elevate In Word Usuage, Metaphors, and Punches. Your Trying With The Mulits but Word Usuage Will Make Them Better.

Vote - Triple N

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