ok breakdown!!........
Opener - street
Punches - street
Flow - street
Personals - street
Multi's - street
Closer - street
Sustainment - street
Enjoyment - street
v/street
street...dont get cocky cuz u swept him in ery category...u need mad elevation....ur opener was bout the only good 2 lines in ur verse....the opener is where you had your multi....you had a WEAK personal but G had no personals so u go tthat category...ur punches sucked n were indirect...use personals for direct punches....your flow was actually good....aight good win bro keep up tha good werk....
G...u need to werk on punches....use personals...u can go talkin bout his mom cuz that shit makes u get laughed at....use drect punches...come at the boy wit force....use multis....go to tutorials n learn sum stuff...stick on the newbie battle level n keep elevatin....ull get betta...holla wun
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