youngenvy...okay u had nice structure and flow but that was about it....u lacked vocabulary and u had no personals. those are symptoms of a newbie and ur punchlines were not hittin at all
choppa city. okay u need some work to do also. especially on your structure. break some of your lines in half or something. but u went right at your opponent like a battle is supposed to be...good job on doin your research. do that more often i'll guarantee u get a lot of victories. vocabulary was better then young's

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