whoooah...

sorry young kid.. u seem young man.. ya rhymes and vocab is all elemnetary... no hate tho dawg.. I just dont feel it..

but I really like parts of urs quick punch... like You're dreaming if you think youll ever wallow in wealth, Rip your lips over your head and make you swallow yourself" gotta say I did like that a lot.. but some other parts didnt flow well.. but overall it was still better
so vote goes to quickpunch