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Old 04-05-04, 06:42 PM   #33
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first off, you both should be dq'ed for upping so fucking much. Second off you write, this battle is getting slept on hard. Third off, GKillaz05, never say the word "cum" again, sounded like u used it in every other line. Structure, i would say GKillaz, both of u had good stucture, but ghost had one or two stretched out lines (not a big deal)
Personals, Ghosts, GKillaz, ur only one was the one about cum and him being a ghost, and u ruined it with saying that damn word again. Punches, even, both came with a load of decent punches.

v/ghost

for his personals