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Old 04-05-04, 09:32 PM   #7
G Deuce
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From: The Underworld
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Unfortunetly, this was one-sided and unmatched, but here it is...
Quickpunch
flow 7/10 - could have been better but had a continuous vibe
word usage 6/10 - metaphors were at a lost
punchlines 8/10 - cool
content 7/10
total - 28

Big N
flow 5/10 - To easy. Was like a was reading a doctor Seuss book
word usage 5/10- rhyme scheme was to laid back and didn't seemed you tried
punchlines 6/10 - almost didnt have any until the last bar
content 6/10 - once again simple
total - 22
vote - qp

Big N, just keep working at it
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