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Old 04-06-04, 12:18 AM   #21
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STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
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From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
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aight umm nice battle..lets me break dis shit down pause!
STRUCTURE- aka
PUNCHLINES-aka>>>dis line rite here
this kid swear he a balla so imma step on his cout/
fvck ya bio u couldnt rip emcee if they're on the cover of "source"/
^^^^DAT SHIT WAS SERIOUS DUNN
FLOW-aka
PERSONALS-baller
ENJOYED-akademekz.....i felt his shit more cuzz it was a hott battle verse...clever punchlines and all....and baller ya shit was aight dunn but who talks about dr sues books in they battles?? come on step ya game up

MY VOTE-AKADEMEKZ....and can ya'll vote on wun of dez battles

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118237
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118202
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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT