Yo Dawg Im Guna Be Honest Coz I ActuallY Read Dis Peace The Other Guys Above Me Didnt....You Can Tell They DidNt Read It Coz There Repiles Were So Damm Short And There Replie Was A total Lie...

This Peace Was Ok For A Newb..but It Was Wack In Most Departents.....Your First Line Was A Tipiacal Newb Line Eg: Refering To Drugs.....Dats Wat Newbs Always Spit Bout Drugs and Guns.....The Rest Was All Simple Rhyme Scheeme......Ur Vocab Was basic and Structure Was Wack Coz The Lines draged to Much...But For A newb This Was a Good Start...Overall....6/10
Godd Effort keep ASt it dawg..Pz out

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