ok pretty even battle
BREAKDOWN
Opener - Murder...wasnt too imopressive but better than aka
Flow - Murder...his lines werent stretched n that helped his flow...aka dont stretch ya lines cuz it fucks up ya flow
Punches - Murder...most punches in this were indirect...sum of murders were aight so he got the punches
Personals - aka....muder had none....aka only had one and it was weak but a weak one beats no personals at all
Sustainment - Murder...he kept a hot verse up....aka ya shit started off slow but u picked it up...nice spit towards the end
Closer - Murder...pretty nice closer n u ended it wit a nice punch....aka i didnt feel ya closer cuz it didnt flow
heres some advice
Murder - never try to use punches say ur mom...unless ya shit is so hot...it makes ya rhymes elemtary....nice spit overall...and use personals
AKA - werk on your personals....werk on not stretchin ya lines.....overall an ok spit......and werk on punches
v/murder
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