first battle, lookin for feedback only

I take one look at diablo and i can tell he's a homo/
his rhymes couldn't be "solid" there more "broke" than a hobo/
and if my rhymes don't getcha than i'll kill you with structure/
fuck just your spleen it's your brain that I'll rupture/(ruptured spleen)
and if even that fails me I'll "blind" you with imagery/
you can't run "next to me" cause you lack the mental "symmetry"/
you better take notes cause my rhymes are on point/
face it man you couldn't smoke me if i was a joint/
cause my "flow" is "sicker" than over"flowin" toil-etes/
this battle is like a movie, i'm gonna spoil it/
cause after peeps read what i write theres no question about it/
you couldn't get "heard" in a silent room if you "shouted"/
so for right now I'm gon stop and give you a chance/
remember, don't come to the show if you don't know how ta dance/

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

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