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Old 04-07-04, 03:43 AM   #13
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okay i saw about the afterword saying he had a (0-7) record how the fuck that happened i dont know.... but with that all aside...
AFTERWORD ripped atticus a new asshole... thing is atticus was uncoordinated he seems too new.. for example... this was atticus best line...
"encodin' my 'flows' so 'encrypted'
couldn't be 'broke' by 'imhotep' the 'egyptian'"

but afterword ahd many to choose from he chose complex and organized rhyme structures for example this line by afterword..

"I have a bad habbit of flowing spuratic, and it may get hazordous/
but no need for that shit, i can get some old lines out of the attic,
to beat Atticus//"

he showed structure and what i lveo the best about any rappers style is the major usage of internal rhyme and slant rhymes shows the person is thinking and has a verbose vocab similar to mines...habit,spuratic,hazourdous,attic,atticus all are part of the internal or slant rhyme..
Therefore i give this vote to afterword...apologize for the long explanation but trying to so it all by the books.
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