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Old 04-07-04, 10:51 AM   #15
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Well...deep dawg i wld say ur vocab and punches were betetr than echos....BUT ur lines were WAY to long so the ryhme went completly out of da window...so this basiclacy means it didnt ryme or flow....the end to lines rhymes but there were to many words between each ryhme to make it actually rhyme...so overall you get 2/10 coz rap anit rap with no rhyme realy....ehco...ur content was a bit below par mna..try longer words and wordplay need oilin'...but not bad for a newb....u..if da overcat actually got some basic structure he wld walk dis battle but seein' as his lines didnt ryhme coz they was 2 long he lost this one...echo wins coz his actually rhymes......im sorry but dat is a Fuckin' basic of rappin' so my vote gos to echo
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