The New King Of New York
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IP:
Vocab- G
Flow - Zeet
Punches - G
Creativity - g by a lil' bit
G was very impressive. The only thing I didn't really like was havin' to read through that whole shit like a paragraph, but everything else was madd on-point. These lines was the highlites.
My words will shut this hoe’s mouth, and take him out of misery
And have him seeing nothing but dark like “BLACK HISTORY”.
Freedom at last, won’t be none cause this nigga just got his heart hurt.
I’ll splatter his rhymes on walls and call it artwork.
That was sick.
Zeet was madd tight too. A couple of them was a stretch to rhyme though man. Just work on that a lil' more, the approximate rhyme is sometin' that works more in an audio battle, but not in text where you can't make it rhyme through inflection. You was pretty good though fam. G just got ova on you a lil' more than you did him. That's how it's goin' down.
Vote: G: Deuce
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