I thought both was kinda weak - Gkillaz you used "cum" too many times, it was good at first but got old fast. The flow was pretty good though, and the early punches were nice, so I give this one to you.

Ghost, your lines was too long to have just one rhyme, no great multis, not great flow and not much in the way of punch. Gkillaz gets my vote.

drop a line on mine:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117350