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New to RB
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IP:
Ummm ok this battle was soft
creativity - Gkillah
personals - GB
punchs - gkillah
flow/structure -gkillah
Multies - both/tie
meta's - Gkillah
vocab -GB
Gkillah - verse was dope. You had a few good punchs in there like ur finisher was really nice compared to GB. Multies, and structure was real nice. Some filler, but those where to setup punchs. Vocab was weak, but ur punchs where strong
nice record you bitch 0 for 9 why dont you just quit//
your rymes couldnt be saved by a fuckin first aid kit//
^ fav line good multi/punch
yours are so soft cuz you just got done jerkin off//
come at me as hard as you can it still gun be soft//
^ really weak line
GB - your verse contained alot of filler, and sometimes it wasn't even to setup a punch which is horrible. Altho u had the better personals they still weren't all that great like the blame canada line bah overplayed. Vocab was better, but u lacked flow, and structure. My advice to u is try and incorperate filler into a really nice punch altho I liked ur creativity just not as much as Gkillah
I didn't have a fav line from u
worst line was
fuck u you stlyes real vague/ ill kill u and canada/ just call me the plague
^and that was ur finisher u gotta come stronger then that with finishers if u expect to win battles son gt
vote GKillah
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