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New to RB
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IP:
ok this was an alright battle.
Creativity - Baller
Personals - neither
Punchs - Spul
flow/Structure - spul
Meta's - baller
multi's - baller
Spul - I liked yah flow/structure very we'll done some of ur punchs where weak, and others good at best. You did however do 1 thing that must not be done in a battle talk about how ur going to defeat ur opponent thats wack man u can't do that, and expect to win
Why’d you take so long? Why’d you hqve to stall?
The number after “baller”, is how many times I’ll make fall
^was a decent finisher very creative
You like hard, long rods… shoved up your big tushy
I’ll stick one right in yo mouth… and call you a big pussy
^made me laugh
I’m always “In Da Club”, so they all call me fitty
I’ll have more salt in yo mouth, than there is in yo city
^another decent punch not bad
Baller - ur verse contained alot of filler, but u had better creativity, and multi's/metah's in ur flow. Punchs where decent, but ur flow/structure through u off.
My vote=Spul why we'll from how I broke it down above it seemed like baller had the edge, but spul dropped an all around good verse contained very little filler, and punchs where decent I liked his multi's(altho i thought baller edged him out), but his punchs where stronger which won him this. Baller fix yah rhyme structure, and try not to have so much filler ur verse was decent. Spul stop with this me me I I, and explaining how ur going to kill him u just JUST edged out a win in my books with this battle
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