Punches: Deep, by a bit.

Personal: Deep, with the echoe line. That was tight.

Other shit: Tie. Deep, your lines were too long in places and that makes the flow/structure a bit messed up, kinda hard to actually rap that shit. Echo.. what's up with the "*" thing.. if you can't tell your story in your lyrics too bad.

Pretty good on both sides, but I go with Deep.