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Old 04-07-04, 06:22 PM   #24
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Ya'll On The Look Out' .. Check This Shit

Ok No Bullshit....

I Like Triple_N's Verse, Now Thats The Sharpest Ive Seen Ya Spit, Pretty Good, I Like From Both Of Ya'll, Haha Nice Nice, This Competition Bringin Out The Best Shit I See in This Site For A While, Triple_N's Cleanest Verse From You So Far lol

Check Triple_N's Lines

You wanna fuck wit me, then u leavin' here on a gurney/
Cuz your origins gay, your parents were "bert & ernie"/

There You Got WordPlay And An Alright Punchline Better Than Most Of Jay's.

These lines below is multis plus a good punch lines.

I'll crush u, an roll you up in a ball on any given day/
drive down south, take shots on ya court, jus to show off my "countree jay"/
I knew I'd bust ya ass at first glance, face facts u have no chance/
Cuz I'll vandalize ya countree ranch, then hang ya ass from "da branch"/


And a strong final verse to finish it all off.

You say rappin', writin', an recordin is ya life, to me that's funny/
Cuz like a broke ATM you ain't never gon' make no money/
If you sent applications to MTV you'd still never get "made"/
Cuz ya ryhmes got as much substance as da fart I jus laid/

See Thats a Proper Verse, Droping Decent Bars

Votes Should Be Conucted on

personals: Jay
punches: Triple_N
Flow: Jay
Multis: Triple_N
Wordplay: Triple_N
Lyrical Content: Triple_N

Its easy to say Over all .....Triple_N

(this is a well explained vote)
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