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Old 04-07-04, 07:31 PM   #14
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aight Check It...

G-Duece: 6/10
I Liked The Wordplay You Used In This Battle. Nice Flow, Structure Could've Been Better. Decent Punches and Metaphors. Mulits Still Need Work.

Zeet: 4/10
I Didn't LIke Your Flow Too Much, Stretched Out Bars, Um...Word Usuage Would've Helped You Out. Multis and Metaphors You Need To Work On. Punches Were There But Not Hot. Just Elevate.

Vote - G-Duece

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