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Old 04-07-04, 07:34 PM   #27
Enygma
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Cife: good verse, you had some good wordplay but nothing really stuck out. That genitals line wasn't bad but the senital line could have been worded better. One thing I noticed was that you never really came wit any personals. The one personal that you did come with was kinda played. I used it against him in my first battle. I liked the closer though, that shit was pretty tight.

Accomplishment: Another good verse. I liked how you brought all ya boys names in there, that was kinda tight. Wordplay was good and flow was on point!

Overall there were two good verses here but with any battle only one can truely be the winner. This time I had to go with.............
.......Accomplishment
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