this was a decent battle, atticus if you keep practing you could be a good emcee, its all good though cuz everybody has to start somewhere, so biggups son keep doin' u.
Yo afterword that was a tight verse son, I liked your word usage and how you described this forum you was on point. I also liked how u used your multies, fire son.
Flow: After
Structure: After
Word usage: After
Punches: even
Wordplay: After
Multies: After
Yo, y'all holla back peep it out son
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