I have to give this to ghost, you had a solid verse and decent punches.
Renewer your verse made no sense son, no disrespect but yo u need a lot of work
Flow: ghost
Structure: Ghost( u need to tighten it up though)
punches: Ghost
Wordplay: Ghost
Vocab: Ghost
multies: Ghost
Ghost I liked your verse but you could have had stronger punches, but you still murked that nigga.
Holla Back> seriously peep this shit son
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118131