aight first off supreme,i dont like people using stories in there stuff unless there is some obvious relevant theme,i understand it but everyoen doesnt so dont do it..

as for afterword ,he came off ,and posted his words,, straighforward no added pizzazz trying to make a story like ssupreme with1...2.3...4...5..6. nah not happening

afterword had precise flow that made you think it was structures nicely and showed authority over ssupreme.who barely poster the 10 lines and theyawere in bold ot look bigger like he wrote a lil more than waht he did which wasnt much at all example follow below

afterword:i may just jack-son, like im Samuel on dat Shaft-shit///
i flow with a pas-sion, and it will get-drastic,
as my airborne gasses make ya whole Class-Sick////

so dude, take them $$ out of ya name,
u are no-where near being close to Ma$on Betha/////
so just let-us( lettuce) trend settas, rejoice and relish(2x), in our victory, and you'll never catch-up( ketchup), b/c u rhyme so pitifully/////

and here is ssupreme:ROUND 2) I'M APPLYING THE PRESSURE, YOUR HEART'S RACING MAKING A NON STOP BEAT*
I GOT YOU SWEATING MORE THEN A OBESE KID AT AN "ALL YOU CAN EAT*"

ROUND 3)IT'S MORE THEN LIKELY MY WORD PLAY GOT YOU FEELIN' DIZZY*
YOU'LL GET TOSSED OUT THE GAME QUICKER THEN 2 KIDS WITH A FRISBY*

do i really need to say anymore?

check my battle
Vc vs. shadows edge

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568