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Old 04-08-04, 10:22 AM   #14
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both were wack....
Rollin_Deep:
Punches:6/10..some hard others a bit played...
Flow:3/10..lines were to long...
Wordplay:..5/10...not bad for a newb but use longer words...
Structure:3/10..gen lines to long...
Vocab:5/10....some nice words
Personals:1/10..none realy efevetive
Overall...5/10
Aittuss:
Punches:5/10...some week tho...siome hiting hard..
Flow: 7/10...keep the lines at a gud legnth
Wordplay:5/10....use longer words dawg..
Structure:...7/10....much better...kept the lines da same lenght
Vocab:4/10....needs work
Personals:...3/10..agen not realy good..
Overall..6/10
v/atticus
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