Good battle fellah's
Punchs - Shadow
Personals - Shadow
Flow/Structure - Mic
Creativity - Shadow (mic don't feed of verses not very creative at all)
Multi's - Mic (he did have the better multi's)
Metah's - I felt neither had good metah's
ok Shadow ur rhyme scheme didn't flow that creat in some parts ex.
Yo I step up to the mic and my heat fry the fat,
While this dog choke worse than casey at the bat
Me, I’m the satanic rapper, triple six
Can’t help but wonder, how many lyrical licks
It takes to get yo pussy wet
Beating this bitch is no sweat
^^see how u fell of at the end there
Work on yah multi's and rhyme structure other then that u had a good battle verse. Altho some of ur punchs where played i.e.
Let this rap be a lesson, hooked on phonix for ebonics
Watch as my flow get you drunk like gin and tonics
^heard it before in many diff. ways
You open your mouth and we all catch z’s
Fuck you mother and catch STD’s
^I think we all have heard that 1
Mic man u can't play off ppl's verse's esp. on the net doing it face to face is fine, but on the net it's just wack. I liked tho how near the end u started getting creative, and jumped off his verse, and started actually writing something ur own. Punchs, and personals where all flipped, and not hard hitting
overall my vote goes to shadow
Plz vote on my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118478