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New to RB
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IP:
^actually he has thirty lines not including that hugh ass stretched line. 15 barz is what I count, but seeing has there is no limit let's vote
Punchs - VC
Personals - VC
flow/structure - Shadow (VC's was all ova the place)
Creativity - VC
Multi's - VC
Metah's - VC
Shadow- good rhyme structure. You lacked alot of hard hitting punchs, and personals VC just over powered u. U got a good flow now get more creative look at ur lines, and think harder on how u can flip em to be wayyy more effective
Fav line.
execute the court ruling – palm to the chest
already you spasm like you demon possessed
^nice wordplay
VC - had the better punchs personals, and wordplay structure was off, and I lost the flow at times. Try not to stretch ur lines so much delete uneeded words, or reword ur sentences.
Fav line:
cant up your levels for greatness, if you aint striving/
u beating me is unbelievable,like tabloids saying they saw stevie wonder driving/
^^^haha very creative dawg I liked it
my vote - VC
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