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Yo after I vote, return the favor and vote on my battles (check my sig).
Punches: Both of you used some tired stuff, but Da Vinci also used some new stuff. The personal was pretty decent, though the handle/camel rhyme is kinda weak. "Yo dick so small yo rubber got to be magnified" that makes no sense man, magnified means made bigger, get it straight. Da Vinci gets the edge on this one.
Open/close: Da Vinci also has the edge hear with a good line to go out on, Neal starter strong but the close was a bit weak.
Flow: Neal, cuz Da Vinci had some issues in the middle there, stretching rhymes and also some mispelling or something throws it off.
Other shit: Goes to Da Vinci, because he's got the nice worldplay and because Neal's African lion metaphor is kinda weak and I see nothing else there. The "tick" thing from Da Vinci was nice.
Vote: Da Vinci.
Now hit my battles up.
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