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Old 04-08-04, 04:49 PM   #8
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Bout to start a crime becuz my 9 full o' clips/
Do you write on toilet paper? cuz yo rhymes full o' shit
Not bad, but gettin kinda played
I just made a new way to die, make a nigga "mike slain"/
its kinda like sayin my mike game's like Mike's game/
Just glorifyin yourself...
ostrich ass nigga i put yo face in the sand/
you wacker than that island nigga from Making the Band/
Check her sig........SHE'S A GIRL!
It aint a graduation when i make these caps glide/
plus i got guns bigger than J.Lo's backside/
Weak.....
My guns spit hot shit whenever the flame's on/
you would think my ass found it on a mission in James Bond/
*yawn*
cuz you feel my rhymes when the punches hit you/
yea we can battle, but i rather just slit you/
Blah blah blah
i spit lines hot enough to injure satan/
but Blaze gifted with the blades like Ninja Gaiden/
You just need to learn how to word things better
Fuk wid my squad dog, you get rattled and dealt/
cuz the only way im losin is if i battle myself/
Good try......
you cant diss Blaze and think there wont be a fight, boys/
my rhymes haze and spank like fraternity white boys/
Finally a good punch......too bad she's a GIRL!!!
you betta run wheneva Blaze see ya and step guy/
or you gon die before your time, like Aaliyah and left-eye/
Once again, a good punch but check the sex

Play The Racist Card With Me, Its "Bull-Shit",/
Called YourSelf A Retard, I'm Loaded With A "Full-Clip",/
Not a good opener but not that bad
Think Your Ob-Servant Cause You Can 'Peep-My-Profile',/
And The Mean While Still Aint Cramin 'My-Style',/
Where's the punch?
I'll Take Your Lips and Clean My Floor,/
Then Po-Pimp Your A$$ Another Mop-n-Glow Whore,/
Ehh......
You Opened The Door, And It Shut In Your 'Face',/
You Tried To Rock Tha Mic, But Your A 'Disgrace',/
Booooo...
Don't Show Your Face Around After This Battle,/
After This Verse This Shit Is Handled,/
Is it over yet?
I'll Dismantle Your Raps, Your 'Fragile-A$$-Style',/
Ain't There A Damn Thing You Can Find Without 'Generalities'?,/
Loose The Whak Rhyme Verse, Its A Curse Why You Frontin G?,/
I don't even know what that means.....
As A Matter Of Fact, I Chirp Birds On A Roll,/
If Ya'll Cant Figure It Out, You Shouldn't Know,/
OK????????
I Got Two Fo-Fo's Plus A Pack Of Pit-Bulls,/
After All This Shit, You Barking Like A "Shit-Sue",/
Not bad.....
But I Know The HardHeaded Got Feel It To Believe It,/
A So Called Contender Trying To Toppl When Im Seeded,/
Weak closer......

Overall............ I expected a whole lot more from this battle. Quite frankly I was dissappointed.

Juss Blaze didn't really hit any good punches. He didn't even know he was battlin a girl. Next time you might wanna check the sig before you post a verse. Also, work on your personals, flow and structure........

DisasterPiece wasn't that bad. She had a lot of rough spots but she hit a few good punches. You still have a lot of elevatin to do but for now you merked this newb.

Vote: DisasterPiece
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