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Old 04-08-04, 05:44 PM   #13
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Check VC's Lines

*metaphorically*,ill get into ya skin *sporatically*,have you outdated that i couldnt c-14 your ass *historically*/
renaissance, im *radically* replacing you with demoes *statically*,like WW1,ill conquer that ass *stragetically*/

^^Tight WordPlay.. & Vocab & Also Multies' ... Tight Tight

Check These Lines ... On Punches

shadow,have him sliced up concealed in glad~bowls/
u not seeing me,like i was hollow an and you was double blind~fold/
cant up your levels for greatness, if you aint striving/
u beating me is unbelievable,like tabloids saying they saw stevie wonder driving/

Over All I Enjoyed Your Verse But... You Need To FixXx & Work On Your Structure' Because Shit Is Hard To Follow

Shadows edge Your Shit Was A Bit Basic.. But I Give You The "Flow & Structure" Shit Was Easy To Follow OVer All Nice.... Verse

Vote: VC
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