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Old 04-08-04, 07:40 PM   #28
Shadows edge
retired.
 
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IP:

both of have that habit of splitting up your lines in two.. kinda gives it no cohesion, but whatever.

ghost:

opened hard then dropped off, the third bar was just terrible, no good punch and piss poor flow. also, kinda cool how you kept using movies and people, but gets a little old, for me anyway. a good personal, so points for that.

renew:

man you used micheal jackson for 2 bars... not even anything creative, its old by now, give it up. other than that, no real great punch, flow kinda off, the close was ok but not great for a close..

vote: ghost, barely.

vote back on mine.
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