Kuniva wins.... much better structure... came with some weak lines but a few nice concepts.... basically it was just a better ocntstructed verse

Acc.... work out your stretched lines kiddo... it ruins your verse, if you'd leanr how to word things and write them properly you may have some decent punches... right now you dont


Vote - Kuniva

Peep me vs Restricted
(it'll be open tomorrow as there is a couple bad votes)