A'ight...I enjoyed this battle...kuniva...you had a decent verse, you came wit some punches and a nice personal...flow was off though, which sorta ruined your personal...and you should try your hardest to use some other words that rhyme...

6/10

Best Line: this guy really wanted to battle me, thats why he follows me around this site
goin in every forum im in, tryna convince me his shit is tight

Worst line: it will be a true ACCOMPLISHMENT, if he can get enough dr votes,
to win a battle, but compared to his verse, theirs more rhyming lines in a barcode

Accomplishment...tite verse dawg...your structure mainly stayed consistent, and you had a punch in every bar...nice shit...all's you need to do is work on structure, to make sure flow stays intact...overall, you punches were hard...tite shit...the "ties to the street" shreet was fuckin' dope...

8/10

Best line: said ya could see the future, so i kicked ya in ya face, brought ya "eyes to my "feet"....
end up wit yo shoes onna "lamp-post", yeah you got "ties-to-the-street".../

Worst line: yo bitch welcome to "ClAS" today ya learn how accomplishment whips fuckin ass.../
Im da "Sic"kest, if requirment was to fuckin loe, kuniva dawg you pass.../

Looks like both of your closers weren;t that great...but overall, I think Accomplishment gets this one with an overall better verse...tite shit thogh, no beef...

Vote- Accomplishment


Hit these up...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117367

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