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Old 04-09-04, 01:19 AM   #34
Afterword
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yo im with accomp. on this one
his shyt was more on point, better flow, aight transitions, and just more affective

"whatcha life, dats right i use cife for targets...
accomplishment a.k.a. known for Felony charges.../

un-depicted, like nostrodamous all ya rhymes i predicted...
get wit it, like da leader of "undestructable emcees", all my rhymes "Re$tricted".../"
hottt shyt famm

cife u came decent but uppin ya lyrical devices

peace
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