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Old 04-09-04, 01:21 AM   #40
Atticus.
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Baller the first thing I noticed about your rhyme was that you had entertainment longevity, average complexity, cool structure. Spul, you came with low complexity, not much of a entertainment factor, pleasable punches and above average structure. final judgment is this - Spul, your rhymes didn't contain much liveliness, in the process of constructing your rhymes this factor ill presented in your structure, watering down your complexity... and for Baller, I enjoyed ballers expression especially in his fourth bar though it was fucked up, you presented good complexity and you systematically added that entertainment in and thats really attracted me.

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