breakdown....
Opener - shadows...droppin bombs wus pretty nice compared to city's...
Flow - city...ya flow was nice....shadow werk on ya flow...
Punches - shadows...ya actually threw punches...city u were jus talkin while rhyming...elevate...
Personals - shadows...both need werk on personals but shadows did have a couple decent personals...
Closer - shadows...was a weak punch but iwas betta than wut city wrote...
v/shadows for an overall more devloped verse
city u need to elevate...shadows u need elevation but good job u have potential.....
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118637