ok i liked this battle....pretty good overall
BREAKDOWN
Opener - Limited...he had a personal in it which added to the effect...proof yours awas aight...
Flow - Limited...his flowed better...proof yours was a fast flow the way i read it n it sorta didnt werk...werk on yea flow...
Punches - Limited...he threw direct punches....proof ur punches were indirect...try usin stronger personals to help wit ur punches...and metaphors too...
Personals - well this was a tie...Limited only had 2 hard personals and proof had alot of weak personals sothat rack up as a tie....
Closer - i liked proof's closer but than limited merked by a kracka had me laughin...Limited got this category...
nice battle overall
v/ Limited
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