Yo, it takes little to no common sense to see that Shadow one this shit. City...you need to elevate a lot. Structure, punches, vocab, everythin' was just so elementary...go look at other people's battles and see how you do a text battle...elevate dawg...
Shadow, your verse wasn't tha greatest either, but fuck it, you had enough to merk this kid. Punches were decent, but played...structure and flow was actually pretty damn good...ya got potential dawg...elevate....
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No hate...hit this up an' finish it off...thx...
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