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Old 04-09-04, 03:02 AM   #24
Diablo-Vice
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yo this battle goes to marvol
Marvol-good rhyme, not enouph punches but over all a good flow i lik the style of your lyrics but you can flow alot better than this good structure i just felt that the rhyme could have went in a better direction
Miss-i only have one thing to say. i like your verse its quick and it gets to the point no bullshit add in words just to take up space. the only problem is that i didnt fell that your lines ryhmed. but still a valient effort. good work both of you
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