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Old 04-09-04, 08:39 AM   #13
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for adebisi:

flow:i don't know pretty basic nothing that stood out wasn't bad though 6/10

volcab:good job better then average 7/10

punches:you threw a good amount of them really attacking him almost everyline my fav line,"Quick to slam ya head through the TV, just to channel ya thoughts" didn't really care for that line against me but good job here 7/10

overall:20/30 you should post verses like this in the battle league this was good a whole level better then what you do there

breakdown for restricted:

flowretty average even off in spots not the best i've seen from you 5/10

volcab:good use i guess kinda pointless though when you didnt really flow too great 6/10

punches:some real good lines here seemed like they really hurt my fav,"A Chance To Run, But You'll Die Trying Like Terry Fox/" i'd give you 7/10


overall:18/30 good verse but the flow just seemed off on this one

vote--adebisi even though he's trying to throw lines at me he did take this one here
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league